Saturday, 2 October 2010

It's hard to say Good-Bye

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 15; the fifteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Himesh, the station master at Gauripur railway station, had a routine day and night work viewing signals, and supervising the train traffic system in and around the village.  Having a home just at the backyard gave him flexibility to come to work as and when required. 

35 years back, he got this job on compassionate basis after his father’s death. At first, he was not fond of these mundane tasks.  But slowly, that became his passion – the sounds of train engine, station bell, whistles, the hustle and bustle of the crowd getting into the trains and moving out, the petty shop walas – It turned out to be his life. 


To the villagers, Himesh stood for his honesty, hard-work, and helping mind.  This was one station where even the regular passengers from train will get down to meet Himesh, and have a brief chat with him.  The Head of Village Panchayat was more than happy to have his daughter wed-locked with Himesh.

He had his distinctive style and approach to break his humdrum tasks and to make the work exciting.  He went beyond what is required for a station master, and tried to establish a good bonding with local villages and passengers, entertaining the children, supporting and advising the petty shop walas. 

His office had toys, funky masks and dolls to amuse children, a music system in the waiting hall, and anything and everything to comfort passengers - spending a few bucks on his own was a worth it!  It became the most beautiful and pleasant railway station in the whole of India.  Goes without saying, Himesh was honored as the outstanding Station master last year from President Abdul Kalam. 

Today, the entire village was gathered at the railway station, with flower and sandal garlands, carrying a mourning face.  They could not imagine a tomorrow without Himesh.  He is no more to be seen in this railway station, to cheer up the passengers.  He is not going to be here to help the needy people; He’s not to be seen around anywhere to catch up with a sweet chat, or to entertain the children!!! 

The new station master came out to ring the bell, and wave the green flag!   Villagers were almost in tears now, and shared their final hugs and greetings to Himesh. The train gradually started moving.  The entire crowd waved their hands to Himesh and Tanuja, with tears in their eyes!!

Yesterday was Himesh’s last working day as station master.  He had taken voluntary retirement, and is leaving to Amreeka today to be with his Son and daughter in law for some time.   Although the village was happy for him, they found it hard to say good-bye to their dear friend.
 

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27 comments:

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  2. I thought he died, thank God, he just went into retirement which all of us would come to also someday soon...

    That is life, but he left a beautiful legacy, an honorable services which people will always remember about him!

    This is very good story...I like it! So touching...

    Good luck Vaish! :)

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  3. wondering now...how will my retirement day be?

    All the best

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  4. Nice, different kind of story. Best of luck for the Blog-a-ton.

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  5. That was very simple and sweet without extra beef to it.
    Just like short stories are meant to be.

    You write nice like it :)
    good luck with the contest

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  6. It is people and their character that can begin to define anything from a story to a station anything and everything can be viewed in great excitement or silent grief because of the people behind it.
    I enjoyed your simple take on the story sometimes it is this simplicity that we ignore. Good work.

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  7. We never appreciate what we have until we lose it-and as much as the populace is going to miss Himesh, one can almost also feel the sense of loss he too is going to bear with at this parting.
    A very unique and poignant take on the topic-enjoyed reading it.

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  8. Simple ppl, simple acts make a huge difference in the lives of others...loved this simple man with a warm heart. :)

    Gud one and all the very best to you. :)

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  9. Nicely said.. well done.. retirement can be expressed like this? so sweet one.. Good luck for BAT..

    --Somoene Is Special--

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  10. hehe..me too would like to jump with the lines "en pondati ooruku poyita," lines of janakaraj..but i have ben apart fm my wife and kids for 3 yrs now and i hve to confess i miss her..hey dont pull my leg buddy..:)

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  11. Such a simple and beautiful expression in words about a man who simply loves people. Wish the world would be populated with the abundance of such characters who could bring a smile on the faces of all. Even at the stage of superannuation, these people will be cherished and will keep entertaining others with their extraordinary personality. A beautiful post with such normal expressions. All the best. By the way, I like your profile picture.

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  12. that's very simple and sweet of you Vaish, to write like this. I mean, now I am able to see this spooky picture in a better way. Feel like the station master who just retired and going away in the train, with the deserted station left behind! really!

    good one and positive one!

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  13. simple and touching story. the best stories are always simple. really well written. :)

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  14. Short, simple yet powerful. A story well presented.

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  15. To all - Sorry for my late reply. Have been off blogging due to cold and flu :(
    I'm so glad you all liked my story! Fiction is new to me, and I always wanted to try my hands on this!! all of your comments are so encouraging :)

    @ Amity - Thanks dear. Retirement is a reality, and yeah true...it's a beautiful journey!

    @ Lost in thoughts - Thanks for dropping by. You still have long way to go! Y think about it now. Enjoy it for now :)

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  16. @ the Fool - I liked your story too! I was gazing out thinking for a good story line, and this topic just hit me then. I thought this is a normal story, and a lot of them will be attempting on this! But glad that none of them have written about this perspective :)

    @ Muddasir - Extra beef is definitely needed to make a story appealing. But I thought of keeping it direct and simple, the one which is comfortable for me :) And thanks for your compliments :)

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  17. @ Sidra - Thanks Sidra..for your thoughtful words! Very motivating indeed :)

    @ Brijender - yes...it a lose to both of them. Even Himesh is going to miss the village and fun out at the station, with his job! Thanks again!

    @ Uma - Thanks dear. But there are lot of good and better ones in the marathon! Yes. And sometimes, we tend to miss the most simple things in our life. So I chose to write about this!

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  18. @ Someone - this is one of those retirement expressions that caught my notice!! Thanks for dropping by :)

    @ Rameshji - I can understand your pheelings :) BTW, where is your comment about this story??

    @ Cherry - Thanks Cherry for dropping by. Your comments made my day dear! I simply loved your take on the story as well! And special thanks about comment on my pic :)

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  19. @ Restless - Thanks buddy! I was waiting for your comment :)
    Hugs to you dear!

    @ Reetam - thanks reetam. I really never thought this story will get good critics! That's very encouraging!

    @ Holy Lama - Thanks again! Glad to see your positive comments again! Now I really wish to write more such stories!

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  20. Hey now this was indeed a lovely story, goood after working for so long himesh gets to go and stay with his family .. hopefully the family will take care of him

    You know its hard to find such good people these day .. I loved this story

    and I hope you are doing ok now , i read you were a bit sick...


    Bikram's Blog

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  21. Hey Bikram,
    Yes..true...its hard to find such people in these technology days! Himesh is from previous generation :)

    I'm still not doing good Bikram... Wee cold has grown king size. I really am feeling sick :(

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  22. Awww that is so sweet!!! Even I was afraid he had died, and I don't like sad endings at all... so glad that he is only going abroad :-)

    Thank you, Vaish, for your very kind comments on my blog, and also for voting for me at Indiblogger . I really appreciate it!!

    -Pallavi

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  23. that was like a chapter from a novel..and the story will be continued...will it ?

    very nice :) All the best!

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  24. hey kya yaar itna touching story ko mei kaisa comment karega? rombo nalla irruku...keep the cheers friend:)

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  25. Completely unexpected story!
    Such a nice stream of thought!

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  26. Nice one..reading a short story in the blogging world after a while. Somehow brought back a short story about a station master I read somewhere..not sure where and by whom. Think by Ruskin Bond - not sure though. Of course, the storyline is different..

    Toys and masks, flowers and sandal - nice imagery weaved into the story..

    Sathej

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